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Read These October Writer of the Month Entries and VOTE!
October 28, 2011
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You’ll love reading through these really kewl entries! Then, make sure you vote for your fave for the October iTwixie Writer of the Month!! Have fun!

1) Leaves are all falling steadily from the trees. You look around. The wind seems to suddenly just stop. What is going on, you wonder. Something stirrs behind you, you look around and… there was my friend, Emma. Her eyes were wide with excitement. “This is what I’ve been telling you about, Hannah. The fifth breeze.”

“What?” I asked.

“You know, the fifth day of the breeze. Remember?”

I shook my head ‘Yes’ and acted like I understood her. I was really just confused. Then a great wind blew in my face. If anyone had a camera and was filming my face, I’d look like one of those models from the ‘York Peppermint Patty’ commercial.

~ Grasskit  This story will be continued on my blog.

2) Leaves are all falling steadily from the trees. You look around. The wind seems to suddenly just stop. What is going on, you wonder. Something stirrs behind you, you look around and… you see two beady eyes pop out from behind a tree. Your heart starts beating faster at the sight. ‘Is it an animal?’ You wonder, ‘or something else?’ The eyes start m oving towards you, creepy, glowing eyes that would make cats howl in fear. You can feel your body trembling in terror, and you will yourself to run, but something has held you in your place. Your feet are frozen, numb, and you cannot run, you cannot flee. The eyes continue their movement towards you, and you start to see a faint outline of the owner of the eyes. Human? No. There is far too much fur. Animal? No. It is too big. Beast? Possibly, for it is large, taller than the average human. It has finally gotten close enough for you to see it ‘s face. It’s…

~ NerdyGirl

3) Leaves are all falling steadily from the trees. You look around. The wind seems to suddenly just stop. What is going on, you wonder. Something stirrs behind you, you look around and… it a tiny brown husky puppy, staring at me with wide frightened eyes. I picked him up, being careful not to harm him. He look starved and tired. I quickly unzipped my bag and took out a ham and cheese sandwich. I gave it to him and wathced as he longingly chowed down. “Where are you from?” I asked. The husky puppy whimpered. Something stirred in the forest in front of me. I looked and I saw a dark black figure. It was a tiger! GGRRRR….it said in a loud menacing voice. It wanted the puppy. Buy why? I thought.

~ Mistyfall

4) Leaves are all falling steadily from the trees. You look around. The wind seems to suddenly just stop. What is going on, you wonder. Something stirrs behind you, you look around and…the leaves rustled behind me. I stood as still as I could. I heard a low growl and slowly turned around. Red eyes stared into mine. I suddenly felt cold. As the eyes let out a howl the animal lept at me. I screamed….with laughter! My puppy, Nighteyes, bounded out and licked my face. I pushed her off then ran off again for Nighteyes to fallow me. What fun!!!!!!

~ DragonBlade

5) Leaves are all falling steadily from the trees. You look around. The wind seems to suddenly just stop. What is going on, you wonder. Something stirrs behind you, you look around and… “You can come to our world.”

I turned around. A blonde-haired, lanky boy was looking at me, eyes piercing and emerald green, like a cat’s.  ”Who are you??” My breath comes out in ragged, trembling gasps. I began to back away. The fiery red leaves behind me rustle as I step on them.

“You know me, Clover. You do. The portal will close soon. Come with us, to our world.”

I begin to shake uncontrollably. I was terrified. Who was this boy? And why was he haunting me?

~ tweenfairy

6) Leaves are all falling steadily from the trees. You look around. The wind seems to suddenly just stop. What is going on, you wonder. Something stirs behind you, you look around and…

“Excuse me!” I interrupted. I was a child actress, but finally I was going to regular school. Was he really giving me stage a directions for a real life scenario?

~ swimknitwit


7)  Leaves are all falling steadily from the trees. You look around. The wind seems to suddenly just stop. What is going on, you wonder. Something stirs behind you, you look around and… see a mountain lion. But this doesn’t look like a normal one. This one seems to have glitter in its fur. I pull out my pocket knife, but the feline suddenly says, “I wouldn’t do that if I were you.”

“What the heck?” I ask.

“We’re both meant for something. Meant for something together.”

Suddenly, someone comes up behind me and puts me in a sleeper hold. They then grab a pressure point on my hand, forcing me to drop my knife. I push upward on the arm, but it’s no use. I’ m out within seconds. To this day, no one knows what happened. They only know that the person held me in that sleeper hold until my death.

~ DarkAngel1


8) Leaves are all falling steadily from the trees. You look around. The wind seems to suddenly just stop. What is going on, you wonder. Something stirs behind you, you look around and… you see a small puppy tied up. Quickly knowing he was in danger, you loosen the rope.

“what happened ‘lil fella,” Abbey said cheerfully.

“My owner is a poacher and wants to kill me because I refused to bite someones leg,” the dog said.

“OMG! you can talk, “Abbey said shocked.

“Sure, sugar, the name’s Bungo,”he said casually.

“Abbey,” she says looking at him fugitively.

“Please take me to your house,” he said quietly. And with that she picked him up to her house.

~ WriterGurlie


Good luck, girls! You all ROCK!  Have fun!  :)

Be sure to vote for your fave! The winner will get a writer’s journal!

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