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Read These September Writer of the Month Entries and VOTE!
September 30, 2011
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Remember, only the entries from the first 12 girls have been included in this vote. But all of the entries are included right here for everyone to read! Great job, girls!

You’ll love reading through these really kewl entries! Then, make sure you vote for your fave for the  second, iTwixie Writer of the Month!! Have fun!

1) The trees were turning all those amazing colors that signal Fall, I looked everywhere for my BFF but she was grabbing a leaf from one of the trees. “Wow!” we both said. This was amazing, and we only had the chance to see it once a year. Since my zodiac was Libra, I decided to give the element of air a try. I spun around, and leaves swirled around me. When I stopped, they stopped.

“Science is amazing.” I announced. We ran through the meadows. We picked up leaves and made a leaf album. This autumn, I knew everything would be all right.

~ Grasskit

2) The trees were turning all those amazing colors that signal Fall, I looked everywhere for my BFF but she was no where. I ran around to find her.

“Oh, there you are Mckenna! “

“You scared me,” she said.

“I’m sorry! I wanted to look at the lake it is pretty,” I said.

Then very unexpectedly, Mckenna said, “I always wanted to have my first kiss here.”

“Wow, that’s beautiful,” I said. “Have you got it all planned out?”

“Of course,” said Mckenna. “There is always something else to plan out. Sometimes I think about what I
want to be when I grow up or my wedding cause if I think about it now and have a good idea I can write it down in my journal and remember it someday when I need it.”

That made me think…..

~ Spinner119

3) The trees were turning all those amazing colors that signal Fall, I looked everywhere for my BFF to see if she wanted to come to the mall with me.

“Stella!!! Stella!!!” I called. Nothing. I frowned. She loves going to the mall with me!! I started to walk when I heard the scream of an ambulance coming to the park. I saw what they were here for. “Stella!!! !” I ran to my friend who’s lying on the ground with the parametics hovering over her. “What happened!?” I screamed as I rushed over.

“Someone beat her up, bad.” They lifted her up and put her on the ambulance.

“Wait.” Stella croaked. “Julia, it was Jon.”

My eyes grew wide. Jon. He was always teasing Stella for being fat or ugly. He was a bully. As tears streamed down my cheeks I promised I would never make fun of another girl so this won’t happen.

~ DragonBlade

4) The trees were turning all those amazing colors that signal Fall, I looked everywhere for my BFF but I knew it was no use. She hadn’t showed up for dance and school for a whole week! I walked over to Amber’s (My BFF’S)house. I knocked on the door. At first I thought no one would answer, but the door knob turned slowly and Amber’s mother answered the door.

“Hello, Mrs.Evans, is Amber here?”

She looked as if she were crying all day. She shook her head no. “Amber went to church and never came back……”

read the rest of the story at my blogg!  ~ Blazekit

5) The trees were turning all those amazing colors that signal Fall, I looked everywhere for my BFF but I couldn’t find her. I looked behind the small cottage that had been abandoned last spring. My friend was looking at a particular leaf on the ground.

“Come over here and look at this leaf!”

“It’s just a leaf. What’s the big deal?”

“It has-i-it has a-well,I don’t know. It looks like a unicorn!”

“A unicorn? In a leaf? That’s impossible!”

“But it’s true! Come see for yourself.”

“Okay,coming.” I walked over. I peered onto the leaf.”That’s wierd! It’s a unicorn, and what’s that? A ruby?”

“No,it can’t be, those are goners!”

“But it is…dark red ruby.”

~ Mosskit

6) The trees were turning all those amazing colors that signal Fall, I looked everywhere for my BFF but she was already inside watching her favorite TV show.

I said, “Nina, why are you watching TV when we could be playing outside?”

“Uh… well, I was just finishing up my show.”

“OK, now let’s go and jump in your leaf piles!” So we had a great time playing the leaves!

~ Blazepup123

7) The trees were turning all those amazing colors that signal Fall, I looked everywhere for my BFF but suddenly my crush tapped me on the shoulder.

“Hey,” he said, “What’s up?”

Oh dear,  I thought, what should I do? Remember all those tween magazines… What did they say about
talking to your crush again? “Hey,” I said. (Yes, I’ m very well known for my intellectual conversations.)

“Wanna go get some pizza?” he said.

Wow, this was awkward. What should I DO? If only my BFF was here… “Um… Who are we going with?” Wow, that sounded totally un-cool. There she blows.

“Excuse me. I do,” He laughs. “Your really funny, you know that?”

I’m not quite sure how exactly I was “really funny” with that, but, OK. “Then… Sure!” I replied excitedly. This should be interesting… We headed toward…

~ Roseshimmer

8) The trees were turning all those amazing colors that signal Fall, I looked everywhere for my BFF but she was nowhere to be found. We had agreed to meet under this very tree to talk about our fight we had had last week, but I guess she just didn’t care. I thought about all the possible excuses she would come up with, for example “I had all this homework, i just didn’t have time.” Well, I had a lot of homework, too, but I had made time. Isn’t that what you’re supposed to do for friends? Well, if she didn’t care enough then I guess neither did I. And that was the beginning of the end of my friendship with Heather.

~ Peanutbutter10

9) The trees were turning all those amazing colors that signal Fall, I looked everywhere for my BFF but she had turned into a cat!

I said,”What are you doing?”

And she said, “Follow me!”

So I followed her. She lead me to this hole and told me to climb through it.

“Are you crazy?”

But then she pushed me in. I fell down and down and down until I ran into a bear.

“Welcome to the order,” he said.

I looked down and saw that I was a dog!

to be continued…   ~ Clairepopo10

10) The trees were turning all those amazing colors that signal Fall, I looked everywhere for my BFF and found her texting her so-called BF, Carlos. I personally don’t believe it and he is a total nerd. He is also a cheerleader. Did I mention a total nerd?

Well, anyways, I say, “Why are you texting him when we are supposed to be studying different types of leaves?”

“Well, I was answering him cause he asked me out on a date”, she replied.

“Oh, whatever,” I said.

The next day, my secret crush, Logan comes up to me and says,  “Are you going to the “Fall Ball” with anyone?”

“Yea, right. Why would I go to one of those things anyways. I am just a nobody,” I reply.

“Well, I don’t think you are a nobody,” he said.

I reply, “What is that supposed to mean?”

“It means …

~ Jordie101

11) The trees were turning all those amazing colors that signal Fall, I looked everywhere for my BFF but couldn’t find her. I searched the field behind my house but there was no luck. As I sat to rest next to a pile of leaves, I saw that they were moving more than the wind had been blowing them. When I reached over to look under the pile, my BFF popped up scaring me half to death. We both laughed till we could barely breathe.

I asked,”Why in the world did you do that?”

She said,”I thought we needed a good laugh.”

For the rest of the day we ran in the field and jumped in huge piles of colorful leaves till we started snifling. We raced inside for some hot chocolate with tons of marshmellows. We couldn’t have had a better day and, couldn’t wait for tommorrow to do it again.

~ GreenNinja

12) The trees were turning all those amazing colors that signal Fall, I looked everywhere for my BFF but she not where we usually meet. I turn around. She is with her, Kristi. I can’t believe it. Just yesterday, Kristi was flirting with her BF, now they’re acting like they’re BFFs. I realise that isn’t the only thing off. Everyone is with their worst enemies. I’m in a parallel…

~ Cshin29

 

Good luck, girls! Remember, only the first 12 girls have been included in the vote. But you all ROCK! Thanks to all the girls who entered! Just click here to read all of the entries! Have fun!  :)

Be sure to vote for your fave! The winner will get a writer’s journal!

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