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Vote for Your Fave FAB FUN February Writer of the Month!
February 24, 2012
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The first 12 girls to finish this paragraph have been included below. Now it is your turn to vote for iTwixie’s Writer of the Month for FAB FUN February! KEWL:) The winner will get a writer’s journal!

Here are the entries. Vote by clicking on the dot in front of the name of the writer whose paragraph you liked best. The winner will be announced next week on March 2!

1) I’m at the Elm Skating Rink wearing my floral dress. It’s Valentine’s Day and I’m waiting for my boyfriend, Nick. He was supposed to be here at 5pm and now it’s 7pm. Why would stand me up like this?! Just as I get outside…to look for him, all of a sudden all the lights go out. I scream, fear building up inside me, “I can’t see!” I scream, “I can’t see!” All of a sudden a pair of gloved hands shoot over my mouth as I feel my legs and arms being bound. I wriggle around trying to kick my capturer. They throw me into what I make out to be a truck, blindfolding me and driving me off . I’m so scared… what do they want with me?     ~ Reach130
 
2) I’m at the Elm Skating Rink wearing my white dress. It’s Valentine’s Day and I’m waiting for my boyfriend, Troy. He was supposed to be here at 5pm and now it’s 7pm. Why would stand me up like this?! Just as I get outside…he is standing there with roses and a smile on his face. “Happy Valentine ‘s Day,” he said handing me the roses. “Don’t give me these,” I said, “you stood me up!” “No I was getting ready.” “For what?” He walked behind me and put his hands over my eyes, “Do you trust me?” I slowly nodded. He led me who knows where. Finally he pulled his hands away and I gasped. He had set up a little dinner with a view of the city. I’m glad the skating rink was on a big hill. “Let’s eat,” Troy said offering me his arm. I took it and he led me to the table. After dinner we danced to a slow song CD he brought. Finally the night ended with a soft k…     ~ DragonBlade
 
3) I’m at the Elm Skating Rink wearing my red dress. It’s Valentine’s Day and I’m waiting for my boyfriend, Jhon. He was supposed to be here at 5pm and now it’s 7pm. Why would stand me up like this?! Just as I get outside…I see a suprise! It is a Valentine’s suprise for me.  It is so beautiful.   ~ hiemena
 
4) I’m at the Elm Skating Rink wearing my red dress. It’s Valentine’s Day and I’m waiting for my boyfriend, Nick. He was supposed to be here at 5pm and now it’s 7pm. Why would stand me up like this?! Just as I get outside…his dad’s car swerves madly into the parking lot. My mouth hangs open as he gets out of the car. “Yeah. So, I had a baseball game I totally forgot about.” he said, scratching the back of his head.
“Too bad for you,” I say, storming off to call my mom for a ride.  ~ thinktank101
 
5) I’m at the Elm Skating Rink wearing my brand new Sea foam green dress. It’s Valentine’s Day and I’m waiting for my boyfriend, Dylan. He was supposed to be here at 5pm and now it’s 7pm. Why would stand me up like this?! Just as I get outside…I see a brand new red car in front of me. As i walk forward out steps Dylan.”Happy Valentines Day!” he said.
“Oh Dylan! Its..its… wow!”
“What you don’t like it?” he asked a little disappointed.
“No! I love it but, you just have your permit and I cant drive yet.”
A sly smile crawls up his lips. “Who said I was driving?” He opened the door to reveal an old man in a chauffeur suit. “Shall we go to the park?” he asked as we get in holding hands. We went to the park and spent the night sipping hot cocoa and talking. I even got my first kiss! This has been without a doubt the best Valentines day ever!   ~ jacmelgirl101
 
6) I’m at the Elm Skating Rink wearing my short fluffy pink dress. It’s Valentine’s Day and I’m waiting for my boyfriend, Javier. He was supposed to be here at 5pm and now it’s 7pm. Why would stand me up like this?! Just as I get outside…I see him kissing another girl! I stare at them, waiting to be noticed. Guess that didn’t work, so I yell “Javier what are you doing? I’ve been waiting inside for like ever. You know what, just forget it. This was the worst Valentine’s day you could ever give me!” Leaving him, stomping away, crying, making him look like a total jerk and the other girl, what’s he doing with her anyway?!   ~ acTiveG
 
7) I’m at the Elm Skating Rink wearing my black dress. It’s Valentine’s Day and I’m waiting for my boyfriend, Danny. He was supposed to be here at 5pm and now it’s 7pm. Why would stand me up like this?! Just as I get outside…a huge staff rolls to my feet. I look up, and I see Danny with a big shiny sword, fighting some evil looking guy. I walk over to the guy and kick him in the face. “Oh.” Danny says. “Thanks. You want to go skate now? “
“Totally,” I answer. “But first, can I keep this staff? It’s awesome.”   ~ emicool
 
8) I’m at the Elm Skating Rink wearing my blue dress. It’s Valentine’s Day and I’m waiting for my boyfriend, Jake. He was supposed to be here at 5pm and now it’s 7pm. Why would stand me up like this?! Just as I get outside…there he is! “Wherewere you?!” I asked. “Why are you so late?”
He answered, “My little sister —”
“Don’t worry,” I said. “Let’s go skating now.” Turns out, we had a AWESOME time!   ~ DrHorrible9

9) I’m at the Elm Skating Rink wearing my new Valentino Lopez dress. It’s Valentine’s Day and I’m waiting for my boyfriend, Riley. He was supposed to be here at 5pm and now it’s 7pm. Why would stand me up like this?! Just as I get outside…to leave he rushes up. “Sorry,” he says. “I was held back by all the commotion.”
“What commotion?” I say.
“THERE SHE IS!” Someone screams. Hundreds of people suddenly swarmed me and I lost Riley completely.
“How does it feel to wear the one-of-a-kind Valentino Lopez Valentine dress?” A reporter asked me. “What are you talking about?” I told him. “This is one-of-a kind?”
“She doesn’t even know it, folks!” The reporter said to a man with a large camera that was following him. He turned back to me and said, “That’s the one-of-a-kind Valentine’ s Day dress Valentino Lopez designed. He said the girl that fit…    ~ Luna12101

10) I’m at the Elm Skating Rink wearing my gorgeous, ruffly, blue and green dress. It’s Valentine’s Day and I’m waiting for my boyfriend, Nathan. He was supposed to be here at 5pm and now it’s 7pm. Why would stand me up like this?! Just as I get outside… I see my mom waiting for me in her SUV and we drive away in silence. When we get home I stomp up the stairs angrily and storm into my room where I find Nathan sitting in my room with lilies, my favorite flower and a small teddy bear. I’m so surprised I forgive him for making me wait at the skating rink for two hours and we go on a walk through the park on the surprisingly warm Valentine’s night.   ~ Keep_calm_and_pony_on

11) I’m at the Elm Skating Rink wearing my black sparkly ruffle dress. It’s Valentine’s Day and I’m waiting for my boyfriend, Chriss. He was supposed to be here at 5pm and now it’s 7pm. Why would stand me up like this?! Just as I get outside… I see him with another girl in a bright pink dress that goes to her knees. I can’t help but walk over to him and confront him…Why would he do such a thing?
“Chriss…what’s going on?”
I feel him put his warm hand on my cold shoulder.”She’s my sister, Haley. Don’t get mad.”
All of a sudden, I feel a weird tingle go through my body. Is he lying? This thought keeps running through my head, and I finally say, “No, she’s not. Your mother never said anything about her, so she’s not your sister.” I walk away, and he follows me . The girl just stands there, and doesn’t sa…   ~ Annaroad8

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