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Vote for Writer of the Month for July
July 27, 2012
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The first 12 girls to finish this paragraph have been included in this vote. So get voting!

Now it is your turn to vote for iTwixie’s Writer of the Month for! KEWL:) The winner will get a writer’s journal from our new sponsor, Compendium. Thank you, Compendium for the cool writer’s journals!

Here are the entries. Vote by clicking on the dot in front of the name of the writer whose paragraph you liked best. The winner will be announced next week on August 3!

1) Maude dropped the hair tie on the store’s floor. She was so bummed when she got to soccer practice because she was going to use it to put her hair into a pony tail. Little did she know that just as she was missing that hair tie, another girl found it. And this girl found it in the knick of time because…part of her uniform was her hair up! If she didn’t wear her hair up, She would be stuck as “manager” for the day and clean up after everyone (And it was going to rain!). Coach Shelby called over Maude. “Why isn’t your hair up? I guess your our manager!” “NO! NO!” I shouted. “I lost my hair tie, but this nice girl named, Alissia found it. I’m right about to put it up. Coach shouted, “Well hurry up! The big game is about to start! Bring your A-game!!” ; “Yes Coach!!” I responded. *1 1/2 hours later* “WHOO!!! WE WON WE WON!!” The whole team was li…   ~

2) Maude dropped the hair tie on the store’s floor. She was so bummed when she got to soccer practice because she was going to use it to put her hair into a pony tail. Little did she know that just as she was missing that hair tie, another girl found it. And this girl found it in the knick of time because…the practice was just about to start! Maude was part of an advanced soccer team, and that practice day was special. Some of the people from the country’s
youth team were there looking for players, and that was Maude’s lucky hair elastic! She couldn’t play without it. Luckily, her best friend Laura found it! Laura reconized the hair elastic immediately, and realized that Maude needed it. She looked through her and Maude’s previous text messages, and found out where and when the practice was . Laura knew where the field was, and it took five
minutes walking. She figured since it was five minutes until the practice started, that she could run and make it there quicker. Laura left the store where she found the elastic, and she ran in the direction of the field. She came to the parking lot and looked at her watch. Two minutes. She had just made it! She saw Maude burying her face in her hands on the…  ~ MissSkinnyJeans

3) Maude dropped the hair tie on the store’s floor. She was so bummed when she got to soccer practice because she was going to use it to put her hair into a pony tail. Little did she know that just as she was missing that hair tie, another girl found it. And this girl found it in the knick of time because…she was being followed. The girl had to find a disguise, she got in to the store, and after looking around she saw that the store was full of costumes , pirates, princesses, wizards, every costume imaginable. She took a random costume and tied her hair with the hair tie and put a blonde wig on. She ran out of the store in the gigantic crowd surrounding her. She saw the man, he was huge, full of tattoos, very hard to miss, he was swatting around innocent people like if they were flies. He was going to find the girl, sooner or later. The girl ran as fast as she could and saw the school Maude was practicing in. She got in and until this moment she realized that her costume was very similar to the soccer uniform. She joined the game and the man lost sight of the girl. The girl was saved. ~ UsAgainstTheWorld

4) Maude dropped the hair tie on the store’s floor. She was so bummed when she got to soccer practice because she was going to use it to put her hair into a pony tail. Little did she know that just as she was missing that hair tie, another girl found it. And this girl found it in the knick of time because…the little girl thought it would be good, so she would help her not sweat ~ kyla708

5) Maude dropped the hair tie on the store’s floor. She was so bummed when she got to soccer practice because she was going to use it to put her hair into a pony tail. Little did she know that just as she was missing that hair tie, another girl found it. And this girl found it in the knick of time because…As she reached down to pick it up a bullet was shot over her head toward the cashier. A man was standing in the corner to shoot the bullet toward his rival’s step-son. Forty years ago, the man had torn his business apart. The cashier and her. Adelaine. Little did she know of the true danger she was in ~ rangermetis

6) Maude dropped the hair tie on the store’s floor. She was so bummed when she got to soccer practice because she was going to use it to put her hair into a pony tail. Little did she know that just as she was missing that hair tie, another girl found it. And this girl found it in the knick of time because…she was the new addition to the soccer team. Maude walked over to her seeing the hair tie on the girl’s hand. “Hi I’m Maude and thats my hair tie,”I said. “Oh sorry I saw it on the floor of the store,”She said sadly. “It’s okay. Your new right?”I asked. “Yes I’m Lily,” she smiles. “Thats my middle name,”I say with enthusiasm and I smile back at her. The see d of friendship had been planted since that day. ~ PrincessKatniss

7) Maude dropped the hair tie on the store’s floor. She was so bummed when she got to soccer practice because she was going to use it to put her hair into a pony tail. Little did she know that just as she was missing that hair tie, another girl found it. And this girl found it in the knick of time because…she needed it for a very important project in school. Emily, that girl, didn’t have time to go shopping for a hair tie. She was starting to feel disappointed
because without that hair tie, Emily couldn’t get a passing grade in school. If she didn’t do good on the project, she would have to take seventh grade again, and she didn’t want that. When Emily, got home from the long walk, she showed her mom the hair tie. “Look Mom! Now I can finally finish that project and not flunk!” Her mom replied Emily with a bear hug. “I love you, honey.” “Me too.”  ~ middle_blocker99

8) Maude dropped the hair tie on the store’s floor. She was so bummed when she got to soccer practice because she was going to use it to put her hair into a pony tail. Little did she know that just as she was missing that hair tie, another girl found it. And this girl found it in the knick of time because…Maude was about to play! She was worried because she refused to play without her lucky hair tie. The girl who picked it up came up and said,”You dropped
this.” Maude thanked the girl a million times. When we were playing I noticed the girl on the field. She was the other team’s goalie! I confronted her half way through the game. “Why did you help Maude?” I asked the girl. She looked at me and said, “I knew it was the right thing to do.” I always think that girl was the nicest person ever because she helped someone when they needed it. ~ Webfreak5

9) Maude dropped the hair tie on the store’s floor. She was so bummed when she got to soccer practice because she was going to use it to put her hair into a pony tail. Little did she know that just as she was missing that hair tie, another girl found it. And this girl found it in the knick of time because…her game was about to start too. An hour later the game of the pink panthers vs the sassy tigers began and Maude was the only one without a hair tie for national hair tie day so she was ready for the screaming to begin. On the other hand, Maddy was ready to play the game with her pretty hair tie. Now it’s time for the match to begin. The pink p’s had 10 and the sassy t’s had 13 points as the sassy tigers made their final move Maude took the ball from her neighbor, Mary and noticed she had her hair tie on so she snatched it out of her hair and put it on hers next thing you know a fight broke out and they were off the team for a month maybe even a year or forever this was a very very very big deal for soccer. As they came home they were bored & sad.The next day they went to school and didn’t talk to each other only to their other friends. What they were talking about was prom coming up tonite. While M… ~ ddfabulous11

10) Maude dropped the hair tie on the store’s floor. She was so bummed when she got to soccer practice because she was going to use it to put her hair into a pony tail. Little did she know that just as she was missing that hair tie, another girl found it. And this girl found it in the knick of time because… as Maude left a small girl was approaching her, she left before the small girl could do anything. When Maude was in soccer practice she saw a small blond-haired girl sitting next to the goal singing a song that went like ” hummingbirds sing buzz does the bees and when the humming birds die bees sart to cry and when the bees start to cry they sting and they sting but that not half as bad as what will happen to me” what a weird song Thought Maude WHAM! A soccer ball hit her in the head and Maude collapsed she had a dream or what seemed like a dream and in the background a song was playing, it’s was the song the blonde girl was singing . And the blonde girl was there leading her somewhere, But where? After a long journey in a winding path they reached a house and the girl and Maude slipped inside to find a mirror and a girl was trapped inside. The blonde girl motioned towards a large grey book…  ~ GurlPower

11) Maude dropped the hair tie on the store’s floor. She was so bummed when she got to soccer practice because she was going to use it to put her hair into a pony tail. Little did she know that just as she was missing that hair tie, another girl found it. And this girl found it in the knick of time because…at that very moment 10 aliens marched through the door. They pulled out their stun guns and soon everyone but the girl was frozen in place. Then, not seeing the girl, they pulled out a square red device which soon turned green. “Air breathable” a female voice coming out of the device said. The aliens pulled off their helmets revealing their squishy sticky gooey gummy bear faces. The girl let out a gasp. All the gummy bears turned their heads, their beady eyes boring into the girl’s head. She desperately flung the hairband at them. It hit a green gummy bear which exploded into tiny lifeless gummy bears.
She grabbed more hairbands and flung them at the aliens. Finally, the floor was covered in gummy bears. The girl was a hero! Scientists studied the aliens and duplicated them, giving us all a tasty snack to enjoy.  ~ crazycoolkid13

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